Walt: write a narrative that is descriptive (paints a picture in the reader's mind)
With a KA-POW!!! the ultrons try to destroy the city but the avengers come to save the day. The ultrons go for Thor but Thor hit his hammer with a BOOM!! And with one go the robot is destroyed. Captain America said “ Me, scarlet, Iron man and hulk smash will go for the Ultrons you guys try think of getting to there boss and lead him here. “Got it” said Hulk smash. While Hulk smash and quiksilver lead the ultrons boss here Scarlet can you try “looking around, and find the wires to these ultrons so it will be easier ok” said Captain America. Smash went Scarlet by using her wicked moves on two of the robots in one go “On it” Replied Scarlet.
BAM!!!! Hulk smash punched one of the ultrons ship to see if the boss was here Quiksilver was running as quick as flash to find the boss, but suddenly they heard something it was… Thor “what are you doing here”, cried Quiksilver “I am here to help Captain said”, cried Thor. “We need to him fast before he is up to something either making more ultrons or trying get people to obey him and destroy the whole world instead of the city”, said Thor. Bang!! Hulk smash cracked to more doors of the ship, but no one was there.
BOOM!!!! Went captain America after just destroying the last ultron, but then extremely more and more ultron's came and the bos was with them “Couldn't find them” cried Thor “holey moley oh there is the boss” said quiksilver. Scarlet came back and said “ there is no wires or anything that is connected to them I think they are controlled by there demander. Thor cried “ why didn’t you tell me the boss was here and you guys didn’t even destroy all of the ultron”, “ no they just came now” said Iron man.
This is just how I planned the avengers standing in my sight, and my army destroying you. Said Iron man “Why are you doing this you know it a hole free world you can start over” “I do but I rather have fun destroying” said poison demander. Suddenly one ultron thinks he can destroy the avengers by himself, but scarlet pulled his heart out with her powers. “Let do this” said Iron man and SMASH went hulk smash and punched 4 in a row. “I can get used to this” said quiksilver. WOW!! “I am gonna need a massage after this” said Iron Man.
Together the avenger destroy the ultron with POOF!! SLAM!! And a BANG!! Then it was the boss left “Oh no” said poison demander, and Scarlet pulled the boss's heart out and Thor throws his hammer on purpose just for fun. “Hey captain can you give me a ride to the massage please ouch I think my back just clicked”, said Iron Man. Captain America said “ok buddy”, and the city was saved no one got hurt then all had a happy ending.
The end
TASK DESCRIPTION: We had to do a test and write our story about the movie but in our own words and if we knew what happened in the movie we still had to write it in our own words. When we finished he said " I was just joking you guys felt for it it wasn't a test but you guys worked really well.
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