Tuesday, 23 February 2016

The ginger bread and the magical beans

Walt: write stories with a complete orientation, problem, and resolution

Once there was a little gingerbread man called frank, he lived in the creek and always forgets what he has been doing. And he loved to swim but the thing that he wasn't happy about was that he didn't know how to.

Frank would always be practicing but always was failing. But one day a weird lady  came and she ask Frank do you want some of my special beans it is fresh and it is good for you to eat,then Frank said yes please, the lady started to laugh then Frank joined in and the lady said ‘ Shhh only I say it not you’ and Frank whispered and said hahaha. He tried to get her name but after she laughed she vanished through the dusty old thick air.

On that day Frank had a nap. And dreamed he was the best swimmer in the whole wild world, then he woke up and said to himself ‘ I should try swimming right now’ so he went to the creek and tried swimming there and he dipped his foot in and said I can do this,he finally tried and he was swimming. Then he was wondering is it me or did that lady just give me magical beans to eat then right then just made me swim. Someone in his brain said ‘I  think it is the weird magical bean thing and that old lady.

He went to sleep and said today was the best day ever and closed his eyes and dreamed of him waking up and every morning he had to swim and he was horrified. So then he woke up and he was like oh my pants are wet but then it was that he forgot to change his pants from after swimming, the next morning he saw the old lady again then he said hey old lady !!!!  He asked her to take these beans out of me cause I never want to swim ever again!!!

Then she asked him who told that those bean will make you swim, ummm myself (lady) oh those won't make you swim, oh so that means I just knew how to swim thanks old lady, oh and the names grace . He said to himself this is like the first time I ever never forgot something,Then Frank lived happily ever after.

Task Description: We learnt how to put different sentences in our writing. And also learnt how to do vocabulary words.

Thursday, 18 February 2016

Tuesday, 16 February 2016

Daisy Cliff Slips Advice blog

Task Description: what I learnt was how to do my own advice blog and I even did more yu can check it out.

Narrative wrighting

Once there was a girl called Amy She was a brainy girl and never ever got anything wrong, like I told you she is brainy.  Then one day she had to go school and she was so excited because she loved to read,write she even liked to do her maths she is in the highest group ever. On that day she thought that today was a good day, but everyone would always cry because something stinks!!!  When ever she was talking and they noticed that it was her breath DUN DUN DUN!!

Ever since she had a stink breath her friends was like ooh that smell like a bird that pooped in their nest without their mom knowing. But then one day she went on her bike and well she was riding on her bike she sighed and people died because of her breath.Then one day that is when she noticed that was the first problem she ever had.

One day the people on earth was silent because of her breath they even put signs of her on every wall that they could find and it said beware the horrifying Amy. On that day she said she didn't know what to do so she thought of brushing her teeth.Then everyone now came to her and gave her a big hug.

Task description:  We learnt how to make our own story. We also planed it and it was going good what we did was high light the things that we wanted in our story. 

Monday, 15 February 2016

Term 1 Wk2 maths follow up

Daisy The Big Dig Vocabulary Challenge

Task Description: we learnt abut the earth quake in Christ church and it gave us information but just like the big slip so then my group now was learning about the big slip

Wednesday, 10 February 2016

Daisy's knowledgeable advice

Task Description: what we learnt was how to do an advice blog and gave some advice to some people that needed some help with there help.

Wednesday, 3 February 2016

labelling a volcano

Walt  follow instructions and present work to a high standard.     What I learnt that Mt Wellington was a volcano and that was sleeping for 10,000 year since.                                                                                                  
TASK DESCRIPTION:      We learnt about Mt Wellington. And labelled our volcano.