Narrative wrighting

Once there was a girl called Amy She was a brainy girl and never ever got anything wrong, like I told you she is brainy.  Then one day she had to go school and she was so excited because she loved to read,write she even liked to do her maths she is in the highest group ever. On that day she thought that today was a good day, but everyone would always cry because something stinks!!!  When ever she was talking and they noticed that it was her breath DUN DUN DUN!!

Ever since she had a stink breath her friends was like ooh that smell like a bird that pooped in their nest without their mom knowing. But then one day she went on her bike and well she was riding on her bike she sighed and people died because of her breath.Then one day that is when she noticed that was the first problem she ever had.

One day the people on earth was silent because of her breath they even put signs of her on every wall that they could find and it said beware the horrifying Amy. On that day she said she didn't know what to do so she thought of brushing her teeth.Then everyone now came to her and gave her a big hug.
 

Task description:  We learnt how to make our own story. We also planed it and it was going good what we did was high light the things that we wanted in our story.