Showing posts with label Short story. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Short story. Show all posts

Friday, 18 March 2016

Little Red riding hood - twist

Walt: retell a story with a significant twist

Far far away there once was a place where wolves could talk. There was a wolf that lived with her mom, but she loved to hang out with her grandma. Her name was little Red Riding wolf and she had  scarlet colored cape and beautiful red bow tie  that she would always wear, on that day her mom was cooking some yummy meat and also found some bones and placed it in a basket. Then told her daughter to give these meat and bones to her grandma so Little Red Riding wolf went to her beautiful and sweet grandma.


On her way to her beautiful and sweet grandma she found some flowers and added it into the basket, but then a big bad human girl saw her and said ‘ I hate wolves I should poison a special thing of mine that i’ve been doing without my mum and dad knowing, so the big bad girl went to go find some delicious bread and poisoned it which made it look evil and disgusting then went up to Little Red Riding wolf. Asked her if she wanted to add some bread to her basket with yummy food, Then Little Red Riding wolf said ‘oh well thank you and yes I will add it to my basket’ and moved on.

On her way to her grandma’s the bread accidentally dropped out of the basket and she didn’t noticed and carried on. On that day Little red riding wolf made it to her sweet old grandma’s cave it was little red riding wolf's first time seeing her because her grandma was getting old and was she(little red riding wolf) was too busy to talk to her on the phone so yeah she was excited to see her grandma. Finally she got to talk to But then the evil girl was making her way from seeing the little red wolf's foot prints.


When the the big bad girl got to the cave she saw little red riding wolf talking to her grandma and was waiting for her grandma to hurry up and eat the bread, So  little red riding wolf finally gave the meat and bones and gave her some flowers to make her feel cheerful the big bad evil girl was so happy but the confusing thing was that little red riding wolf didn’t pick out the bread. The big bad girl got frustrated it was getting dark but luckily little red wolf and her grandma was under shelter before they would of got cold and without the blanket they still wouldn't feel so cold to.


The big bad girl was getting cold but she still wanted to watch, Little red riding wolf was getting tired but you know what the Big bad girl was already sleeping. Little red riding wolf was sleeping and also her grandma but While the girl was sleeping, her mum was looking for her every where but there was finally the last place was the cave and found her in the corner outside of the cave. Her mum was so angry because she didn’t know why she was their then thought the wolfs was trying to eat her then never let the girl outside again.



Task Description: We had to write about little red riding hood but had to do a twist. I had to make it like it like the videos that we watch but just added weird stuff into it not like weird as just a little bit.

Tuesday, 23 February 2016

The ginger bread and the magical beans


Walt: write stories with a complete orientation, problem, and resolution

Once there was a little gingerbread man called frank, he lived in the creek and always forgets what he has been doing. And he loved to swim but the thing that he wasn't happy about was that he didn't know how to.


Frank would always be practicing but always was failing. But one day a weird lady  came and she ask Frank do you want some of my special beans it is fresh and it is good for you to eat,then Frank said yes please, the lady started to laugh then Frank joined in and the lady said ‘ Shhh only I say it not you’ and Frank whispered and said hahaha. He tried to get her name but after she laughed she vanished through the dusty old thick air.


On that day Frank had a nap. And dreamed he was the best swimmer in the whole wild world, then he woke up and said to himself ‘ I should try swimming right now’ so he went to the creek and tried swimming there and he dipped his foot in and said I can do this,he finally tried and he was swimming. Then he was wondering is it me or did that lady just give me magical beans to eat then right then just made me swim. Someone in his brain said ‘I  think it is the weird magical bean thing and that old lady.


He went to sleep and said today was the best day ever and closed his eyes and dreamed of him waking up and every morning he had to swim and he was horrified. So then he woke up and he was like oh my pants are wet but then it was that he forgot to change his pants from after swimming, the next morning he saw the old lady again then he said hey old lady !!!!  He asked her to take these beans out of me cause I never want to swim ever again!!!




Then she asked him who told that those bean will make you swim, ummm myself (lady) oh those won't make you swim, oh so that means I just knew how to swim thanks old lady, oh and the names grace . He said to himself this is like the first time I ever never forgot something,Then Frank lived happily ever after.


Task Description: We learnt how to put different sentences in our writing. And also learnt how to do vocabulary words.