Thursday, 23 March 2017

Bug descriptions

Walt: use different vocabulary in our writing. 

Task Description: What we did first was read articles and watch videos about our bugs. Then we had to write things about it and describe about what our bug looked like and what they do. And finished it off.


  1. Talofa lava Daisy,
    I enjoyed the similes that you wrote instead of having to leave it plain and boring. As I was in year 6 last year I also liked to write similes instead of making my sentence plain and boring. How long did it take you to think of these simile sentences?

  2. Hi Alicia

    Thank you for the comment once again. I am really sorry that I haven't been commenting lately but anyway. I really don't understand what you mean by smile sentence. So can you please tell me what it means. Oh and thank you for the comment!

    1. Ok so a simile is basically describing something and comparing it to something else e.g it felt as cold as ice. hopefully you know what it means and if you still don't then I'm sure your teacher will know!