Thursday, 17 November 2016

A crazy adventure at Motat

There once was a group of girls who were good friends there names were Daisy (me), Jorelle, Amelia, Paikea, Makayla, Naomi and Trendy ( Naomi’s cousin). So yeah they were all good friends they would always be there for each other and always respected their teacher.  One day they all got chosen to go on a special trip with the teacher to a place called Motat. There teacher told them that Motat stands for Museum of technology and transport.


All of them agreed to go, and they were all so excited. When they got there, Daisy said “ Wow is this place like an olden day place or something?” Mia (short for amelia) replied back and said “ Yeah I think so” Everyone liked what they were seeing. There was a lady introducing them to Motat she gave Their teacher a map to show where they were going first.

Miss Moala (teacher)  walked them to the first place they were going to. Then Jorelle and Daisy were busting to go toilet and told Naomi if she could tell Miss that they were going to the toilet. Naomi answered back then said “yeah sure”. Daisy and Jorelle ran to the toilets. When Miss Moala and the girls saw the place they screamed with excitement. Naomi forgot to tell Miss Moala because of how cool the place was. After a while they moved to the next place.

Daisy and jorelle came back and The girls weren’t there. Daisy said “ Where are they, they are supposed to be here because naomi should of told Miss Moala”, Jorelle was worried. Miss Moala was on to her next activity it was the train Jorelle favourite place. Except Jorelle and Daisy still wasn’t there with them. Daisy and Jorelle searched and searched, but they still couldn't find them.

Finally The girls were on to there last place it was the church they really liked the houses around the village but mostly they liked the Church. It was time to go the girls still didn’t notice they weren’t with them and just left Jorelle and Daisy behind. It was getting dark and Daisy knew they weren’t going to find them. Jorelle told Daisy to sleep in the church it was cold but it was the only way. Suddenly Daisy woke up found her and Jorelle in the bus on there way back to school. Daisy was safe so she thought oh well and went back to sleep.

Task Description: I know this story looks so weird like would you actually sleep at motat? No! I wouldn't this story is really actually just made up. So I am sorry for not telling you guys like it has actually happened but really it hasn't.


Thursday, 10 November 2016

Hydrophilic and Hydrophobic

Walt: to synthesise information across multiple texts

Task Description: I had to go to websites and figure out like what is Hydrophobic and what is Hydrophilic and it was really interesting. The Hydrophobic takes all the dirty things off the clothes and the Hydrophilic just makes water to make it easy for the Hydrophobic.

Friday, 28 October 2016

Into the cave!!

Walt: write a narrative
Walt: demonstrate understanding of a number of strategies and skills for writing
(for example, use of paragraphs, a range of sentence types, descriptive language, punctuation, spelling)
On the last day of school Lisa asked her friends Joey, Laura and James if they wanted to go on a trip to a waterfall because it was going to be the holidays. They all said yes after asking their parents. Laura’s mum said that since laura is going then she is going to. So they all went on the first day of the holidays.

When the time came james had to go with lisa, and joey had to go with laura. They were all so excited to see the waterfall when they got there it was sun burning hot. so they got ready to go, and put sunscreen on then got ready to go. Lisa’s mum grabbed lauren's hand (Laura’s mum) and told her what are you waiting for. Then she ran to the cave that led them to the waterfall. They all were wearing summer clothes and was reading to go to the waterfall.


They ran to the cave then Suddenly james fell into a weird place “help” james shouted. Lisa came running she asked him what happened? He answered he just fell. Lisa helped him out. James called the other but told Joey to tell the adults that they are going to hangout in the sun for a little while near the cars on the grass. Luckily the parents said it was alright and said for them to come in the water when they were too hot.

Lisa ran to the car for a shovel then started digging the hole that James fell in. Laura had to stay at the end where her mum was but not to close so when they ask them something she could just answer. Lisa was getting pretty tired but she got through the hole thing just in time. James said “it kind of looks like a secret passageway” Joey agreed. Lisa went down the stairs that led to a place full of gold “to bad for laura who can’t see this” said James. “I am right here”she answered lisa told her why are you here aren’t you meant to look out for our mums!! Laura told her that they fell asleep on their chairs.

“It is getting kind of dark” joey said. They all started looking at all different kinds of gold Joey even found 10 million dollars. They all started grabbing gold and money jewels all kind of good things. Until Joey grabbed something he thought it wasn’t stuck then he pulled it harder then finally grabbed it. The way out started to close!!! Laura was getting scared. “Hey I worked hard for that, very hard” Lisa said. They were yelling for help Joey even tried putting that thing back but it didn’t work. Luckily James still had the shovel in his hand he tried pushing the top of but it was too hard.

They managed to find their way out because James started digging and it led to the back of the waterfall they decided to have a swim. They all dived in and never went into places with a lot of gold ever again.

Task Description: This story was real tricky but I got though it. It may be kind of confusing but it is because I have never been in a cave before. Here is the image attribution right here. I just hope you like my story!!.

Wednesday, 19 October 2016

Poems


 Task description: I just had to do poems that could describe and imagine the action from the character. So yeah it was fun doing verbs and adjectives. Hope you liked my poem presentation.