Friday, 15 May 2015

Daisy and Naomi marshmallow

On a cloudy starless night there was a solitary boy roasting marshmallows on a sizzling fire. You could see the orange glow while hearing   the lake gently lapping on the shore.  He  was in the forest  but in a spot that  did not have any tall and towering  trees surrounding him.

Suddenly a big monster  came  quietly sneaking behind Jimmy while  he  was still roasting his marshmallows.  Jimmy heard  a horrible growling noise and looked at the back of him. He got scared because he saw the scary monster. It had   

Trying to defend himself Jimmy held out his marshmallow  on a stick  out like a sword to protect himself. As quick as lighting  the monster stretched his tongue out and gulped up the marshmallow in one slurp. The monster transformed into a nice monster and performed tricks  like a puppy to get more marshmallows.      

Jimmy gasped. He had found out that he had the last marshmallow. Oh!no! Cautiously Jimmy slowly held out his marshmallow then the monster slurped  up it with his long pink tongue.

When Jimmy ran he stumbled to his pillow and  defended himself it with.When Jimmy held the pillow up the monster thought that the pillow was a big marshmallow .

As Jimmy had the pillow the big fat monster  thought that the pillow was marshmallow heaven  then the boy ran away  the the monster tried   to  roast the pillow but the pillow puffed into ashes.

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