yesterday was fun just like today

(yesterday)
The luge
Yesterday me and my family went to this place called sky line but we were going to play the luge the luge was all the way to the other side. So we had to go in one of the gondola which was really scary let me talk to you about it. When we got their it looked very fun but I knew hat I would be terrified. After we payed and all of that we had to go on the car rides that take you to the other side which has the luge. The car ride thing was called the gondola my hole family got in one a man said for us to say cheese we all smiled while we were in the gondola. My whole family as really excited and. Riding in the gondola I was really scared because I was so high from the ground I felt like I was going to vomit but I didn't. when we finally made it we had to go this wall which said if you were up to the green part you can ride by yourself but if you were so short in the red one you will have to ride with an adult. As time passed by we had to try helmets on I wore the blue one the good thing was it was my favourite colour and it was the right fit.

It took a whole lot of time after lining up but then finally it was our turn I was so excited I know right I was excited lots of times. While we were driving I went to the scenic one which was just my practice. It was really easy to turn you just twist the stiring wheel right if you want to go right and you just turn the stiring wheel left if you want to go left to stop you pull it back. there were 20  rides I got to go three times. It was fun I didn't just go in the scenic I wen in the intermediate for my last two turns. I coulden't go in the advanced because it was to hard I saw a lot of people come back with sores so I only went in the intermediate. When everthing was over and we had so much fun we had to o back in the gondola half because before the gondola was shaking so I got super scared and said yeah go half and half people half and half. then we had such a fun day and went back home.

Superhero story

Walt: write a narrative story.

In a city where superheroes lived and where no one could defeat them. Ordinary robots thought that it was time to destroy the city. Suddenly the heroes found out.

CRASH!!! Went the robots they thought they could get away with destroying the whole city, but then the avengers come to save the day. Captain America says “ Me and hulk will go for the robots you try and think about getting to their boss”. BOOM!! Hulk smash ran to grab a lamboginny “ I am sorry I have to do this but Aaaaaa” cried hulk smash and threw it to the robot.

Then more and more robots came “ Oh no I am certainly going to have a massage at the end of the day” exclaimed Captain America. While Captain America and Hulk went to destroy the robots Iron man and Thor tried to unplug the wires out of the technology ship. Black widow and hawkeye had to try and find the robots boss.

Black Widow and Hawkeye couldn't find him because he was wasn’t there until he knew that the avengers could destroy his robots and they did because people wouldn't think they couldn’t well that what the poison flare thought. KA-POW went Poison flare. The avengers all stood in a group looking at him “ Well well well if it isn’t the avengers” exclaimed Poison flare. “For a hundred years I have been wanting to destroy you and now this is the day I can finally do it” cried Poison flare.

BAM!! Went Thor and threw his hammer right at his face which smashed Poison flares face “Is it me or is he not as strong as we are? Said Hawkeye, “ nope yeah I think he is weak” exclaimed black widow. Together they all destroyed Poison flare and put him were all the villian were the deep dark forest. Nobody went there because you wouldn't want to help villain and you wouldn't want to be in big danger. After defeating the robots the avenger save the day and every one was all happy except for one more robot “ Oh there you are” said green arrow. The End

Task Description: We had to make up our own superhero story. We all had to think about putting explanation marks, complex sentences, speech marks and also question marks.

The three little pigs adventure (retold by Daisy)

Walt: retold a story

The three little pigs

Once there lived  3 little pigs, and they lived with their mum and dad. One day their mum told them to go build their own houses. The 3 little pigs found where they were going to build it and started to get on with it.

The first pig built their house out of hay. While he built it he sang a song because he was rushing to do it, but it was really neat. The second pig built his house out of sticks, he also sang a song because he was happy he finished it quickly.

The third pig was on to it, he never wanted to sing because he was so busy building his house. While the other two were singing the third pig built his house out of bricks. On that day the two pigs were still singing then a wolf caught them while they were mucking around. The wolf was so hungry that his mouth was dripping saliva then started to chase after them.

The first pig ran to his house, the wolf came and and knocked on the door boom boom boom!!! then said “can i come in?”. “You can’t come in, not by the hair on my chinny chin” the first pig replied.

The wolf came and said ‘‘I will huff and I'll puff and I will blow your house down’’. Then the first pig went to run to the second pig’s house. The wolf then came to the second pig's house and said the same thing and blew his house down. So yes they did go to the 3rd pig’s house, the wolf asked pigs can I come in but the pigs said not by the hair of my chinny chin chin. So the wolf did huff and puff to blow the pig's house down but the thing was it didn’t work.

So he tried climbing the chimney so the pig’s let a fire to make the wolf go away, the 3 little pig’s were hoping the fire will let in time and it did but the wolf didn’t know. Wolf was laughing then that was when the fire went and made him fly away from the pig’s house, and the 3 little pigs lived happily ever after.


Task Description: We watched 4 story's of the three little pigs and retold it in our own words.

The ginger bread and the magical beans

Walt: write stories with a complete orientation, problem, and resolution

Once there was a little gingerbread man called frank, he lived in the creek and always forgets what he has been doing. And he loved to swim but the thing that he wasn't happy about was that he didn't know how to.

Frank would always be practicing but always was failing. But one day a weird lady  came and she ask Frank do you want some of my special beans it is fresh and it is good for you to eat,then Frank said yes please, the lady started to laugh then Frank joined in and the lady said ‘ Shhh only I say it not you’ and Frank whispered and said hahaha. He tried to get her name but after she laughed she vanished through the dusty old thick air.

On that day Frank had a nap. And dreamed he was the best swimmer in the whole wild world, then he woke up and said to himself ‘ I should try swimming right now’ so he went to the creek and tried swimming there and he dipped his foot in and said I can do this,he finally tried and he was swimming. Then he was wondering is it me or did that lady just give me magical beans to eat then right then just made me swim. Someone in his brain said ‘I  think it is the weird magical bean thing and that old lady.

He went to sleep and said today was the best day ever and closed his eyes and dreamed of him waking up and every morning he had to swim and he was horrified. So then he woke up and he was like oh my pants are wet but then it was that he forgot to change his pants from after swimming, the next morning he saw the old lady again then he said hey old lady !!!!  He asked her to take these beans out of me cause I never want to swim ever again!!!

Then she asked him who told that those bean will make you swim, ummm myself (lady) oh those won't make you swim, oh so that means I just knew how to swim thanks old lady, oh and the names grace . He said to himself this is like the first time I ever never forgot something,Then Frank lived happily ever after.

Task Description: We learnt how to put different sentences in our writing. And also learnt how to do vocabulary words.